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All the fighting, or all the love?


Fighting all your life, with no one there.
Life's cruel pranks and memories, haunting your way.
Love and bliss but a lost hope in a sea of darkness.

Fighting all alone.
Against multipul enemies, always getting hurt.
The pain close to unbarable but never let go.

Keep on pushing young one, win the battle and win the war.
But find love or all shall be lost.
15 years of pain and struggle endured.

Suicide thoughts enter your mind, the will to fight half way lost?
Young one, whats going on?
You can't give in, Stand up and fight! The one your searching for, he's near by!

2 Years of pain and suffering with some happiness.
Always running blind in the darkness, searching for the light while fighting.
Why are you in the dark little one? Your not alone.

1 More year has gone by little one, did you find them yet?
Running into a girl, your inspired to fight again.
But despare only comes up once more to show it's ugly head.

Stand up little one! Fight for whats right!
Your meet the second girl who inspires you to fight.
Now you feel as though you can go on.

But things fell for you, pick up the peices.
Your heart may be broken but it's not useless.
You can still love. You so close to finding him.

Through determination, you continue to search.
And at long last.. you find him and fall for him.
See little one, I told you, your heart is not useless even if it's broken.

Now go and love him forever. Show him you love him.
Prove it to him, go the distance.
You always have, now you can fight for ever.

Fight to keep the one's you love safe little one.
Especially him, his heart is fragile but stitch it up good.
Show him you will always be there for him.

Show him that distance your willing to walk for him.
Walk through the fire and into his arms.
Love him, care for him. Protect him til you two are able to stay together forever.

Then keep on protecting him.
But don't forget your friends little one.
Protect them as well, with all your might.

Even if they hurt you, keep pushing forward.
Young one, fight for them.
Little one, don't quit for nothing, stay strong.

If not for yourself, then for those three at least.
Fight no matter what pain you endure.
Love them no matter what, keep them safe!
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Author's Comments

ok, update... im no longer with the guy... so yea but the poems nice..

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:iconhikoruthewaywardwind:
I get the general definition, but something more can add on

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Fuck it all. Here i fall. Standing tall. Though i lay dieing.
My last breath brings me to death, at least i am leaving you.
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It's very thought provoking, leaving me with a sense that one is searching through a forest, or a dense fog. The tone, is unique in that the reader feels a sense of loss and relief as the verses conclude.

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Love me, or hate me. Whichever, give me your emotions.
:iconeriob34:
i think it's good... but it lacks... emphasis? (isn't sure how to put it)

i get what you're trying to say, but it needs more emotion! more determination! more "RAWR!"

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Kira Quintessence: God and Future Dictator of the "Free" World!

Leon Robespierre: This can't be what it's come to... that my domination over this human world is through the host body of an insolent girl? *glares*
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:iconbloodaddictkatsu:
nice, but it lacks.... a kick....ya know? Its really good, and you can only improve...^_\|\|

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There is only one way to escape the fantasy world we were brought into: Insanity...and it's not a one person job; but if you open up your mind and heart to me, then we can be insane together...
:iconhalf-breed-neko:
it is perfect the way it is and it was never ment to have the kick you claim.

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abortion is murder to someone who has yet to live, why murder someone who has yet to live when you can kill those who made the wrong choice by supporting this kind of decision?
:iconbloodaddictkatsu:
...fine.......

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There is only one way to escape the fantasy world we were brought into: Insanity...and it's not a one person job; but if you open up your mind and heart to me, then we can be insane together...

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